Thursday, July 10, 2008

untouched place

my grandma is on the airplane right now making her way to us. we are looking forward to spending a long weekend with her. it's been awhile since she has seen the babes and i know she will want to drink them in like honey.
contrary to what might have been said here in the past, both my kids are oh, so sweet.

i ran across the a poem that i wrote in middle school and was struck at how the issues i raise in my poem are the exact same issues that weigh on my mind and heart some 15 years later.
enjoy...


Untouched Place

All vegetation is plentiful and green.
Plenty of fish swimming in the stream.
Oh, how I wish this wasn't a dream!

There isn't a gaping hole in the sky.
Birds of extinction again start to fly.
No more little children have to die.

Wars and contention between neighbors will stop.
From the clouds only clean rain would drop.
Farmers assured of a plentiful crop.

All starving nations get to be fed.
The homeless and weary find the warmth of a bed.
Injustice and prejudice no longer said.

Education and knowledge no longer denied.
Society no longer based on money and pride.
Our dreams and ambitions we no longer hide.

For every disease is found a cure.
Understanding and love are given much more.
All of our worries we no more must endure.

Would we know how to live in this place?
Could we treat it with love and with grace?
Or again must it be destroyed by the human race?




4 comments:

Anonymous said...

The poem is beautiful! So true how these issues are still present today.

Julie said...

Wow Aubrey, that's very deep for such a young person. Isn't it interesting that the powers that be can't seem to learn from mistakes of the past? All the issues you hit on in your poem keep happening in one form or another time and time again. Definitely time to take the power back don't you think?

emily said...

What a great poem! I have never had a gift to write like that. Was that for our English class we had together?! Mr. Harvey, I think?

RedsWritingHood.com said...

I agree with Julie, wow! middle school. I was worried if my bangs were teased up high enough then. This is a beautiful poem, should be a song.